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Can't believe this don't save!!!
So I "finished" my screenplay (Aladren needs to approve/feedback).
So I have started to read FUNTEOJAVENTA
(Pretty sure that is not the name--- maybe it's not eve Spanish. But I tried.)
I cannot get through it. The language is easy and the story of the town rebelling against the commander is a simple tale--- it's just---- god the rhyme.
I know the rhyme is unintentional (or is it!?) but my mind cannot get past it's natural beat ( up down up down up down etc).
It's a simple ABABABBA pattern that almost makes it poetry.
It's very much like a limerick poem.
I try and take the words seriously but y brain is pudding and is a joker today.
Ill keep working on it. So far I'm 5 pages in and singing ABC's....
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